“What does Great Jazz sound like?”
The Snare is,
Notes like fragrant smoke, hewn stone fireplace pine snapping and popping hot tendrils of air rising into a night so cold and black that the stars hang just beyond your fingertips.
The Bass is,
Notes like thick cream, flowing over burnished formica dripping onto oak planks patina polished by ten thousand boots calico cat vibrating up pooling liquid slick to the touch.
The Saxophone is,
Notes like a lovers spanking, over knee bare bottom arching high crisp smacks falling on smooth flesh growing warm and red ’til hot wailing flames scorch the crescendoing sky.
The Keyboard is,
Notes like thunder and lightning, smell of ozone when wind bends trees sideways and the rain comes down drumming on roof like marbles cascading from worn leather pouch.
The Horn is,
Notes like bright glass, shattered amber shards tinkling on mortared wall mirroring electric blue neon frenetic flickering reflection of dazzling jewels swinging fast tempo.
The Guitar is,
Notes like an avalanche, raging eddies swirling slick foamed rocks rushing waves pounding spray casting rainbow of sound hurtling into the abyss carved violent eons past.
Now that’s
What great jazz
sounds like
Swing by the Poets Pub at d’Verse after the show and enjoy a cold one and more hot poems.
I’m not a big jazz fan, but I do love the piano and the guitar. The structure of this poem is wonderful.
LikeLike
Jazz for me has to be the right time and place. To me, jazz is the closest musical equivalent to poetry.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You got that snare just right!
LikeLike
Thanks Kim, I like them all, but something about the snare…
LikeLiked by 1 person
I do love this, like something taken out of the notebook of Keroac or Ginzburg… I guess, I dig it would be apt to say… And hey those lovers spanking made me almost blush
LikeLike
Wow, thank you Bjorn for your praise. I’m glad you dug the jam session even if you almost blushed.
LikeLike
Yeah, great jazz is like poetry…colorful and lush, Brian.
LikeLike
Jazz sweeps you away into random possibilities of connection.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow! I like jazz and I hear it all here. Well done, thanks for sharing!
LikeLike
Thank you very much for listening to the music.
LikeLike
Brian, this is just wonderful. I enjoy jazz and love going to concerts and now you will having me smelling, tasting, sensing the uniqueness of each instrument. Brilliant! And, of course, this can apply to most any genre of music.
LikeLike
Thank you Victoria. It’s true that each instrument ‘tastes’ different. An Orchestral poem would be quite long and detailed. 🙂
LikeLike
I love jazz poetry and this one really ‘rocks’. The guitar is so powerful in this, beautifully written. :o)
LikeLike
Thanks, I figured with whippets around you’d be drawn to the hard charging howl of sliding fingers.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha, spot on! :o)
LikeLike
A very interesting structure, and a great poem.
LikeLike
Thanks Misky
LikeLike
I like how you capture each note and musical instrument Brian ~ I specially admire the guitar sounds ~
LikeLike
Hi Grace, thanks for stopping by for the jam session.
LikeLike
Whew! So very cool – really enjoyed reading this.
LikeLike
Thanks for swinging by to comment.
LikeLike
rain comes down drumming on roof like marbles cascading from worn leather pouch…. great image.
LikeLike
Hi, that is my favorite piece of prose in the poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am a jazz fan, and I am also a fan of this poem. Well done, especially the sax and guitar.
LikeLike
Thanks Susan for adding your voice to the audience.
LikeLike
This is so creative. Well done.
LikeLike
Thank you very much. 🙂
LikeLike
You’ve got to love Jazz to bathe in so many adjectives ! Fun exploration, thanx.
LikeLike
Thanks Sabio. Adjectives exist because nouns are so limiting. 🙂
LikeLike
Oh you are making me like jazz….who knew. To describe music through poetry is a challenge as music itself is poetry, but you have done it brilliantly here.
LikeLike
“Making you like jazz?” Then my job is job done here. 🙂
LikeLike
Loved this!
LikeLike
Thank you. 🙂
LikeLike
Wow! Spectacular! Best description of jazz I’ve ever seen. Bravo!
LikeLike
Why thank you very much! The players will be back after a short break.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’ll just kick back and sip my bourbon till the next set 😊
LikeLike