dVerse prompt to rhyme about the autumnal scents and flavors.
“A harvest wedding”
beneath arbor flush with ripe grape – white tulle and silk – stood the bride
in her mother did confide
subsequently horrified
among produce took brief escape – orange gourds and squash – said she lied
confessed truth parent denied
must admit to mystified
behind sunflowers mouth agape – tan straw and ale – have my pride
promise silence to subside
hope now you are satisfied
around dry corn husks tied with crepe – red fruit and juice – help me guide
in my heart always reside
should return look dignified
above wildflowers pleasing shape – brown horse and boots – time I tried
callused hand assists astride
hold me tight am petrified
you cannot ride
rancher groom cried
why did you hide
fear she replied
cling to my side
love will provide
Authors note: I must admit that I rarely compose poetry in rhyme or meter in the traditional manner. My primary style is free verse and streaming prose. I decided to write this as 8 syllables – inset 4 – then 3 on the first line with 7 syllables on the second and third lines. The 8 syllables ends in a rhyme as does the 3/7/7 stanza. Each 4 syllable inset begins with a color and the refrain carries the rhyme to the end. This was very difficult to write but I am glad to have discovered dVerse and the poets at the bar. I will do my best to uphold d’Rules.
I am smiling at the ending lines despite the initial petrified autumnal scenery 🙂 That’s the risk of having an outdoor wedding ha. Enjoyed the rhyming verses and form Brian. I am a free verse writer too but its nice to stretch our poetic muscles with these exercises.
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My poetic muscles are sore and could use a rubdown this morning. 🙂 Thank you for the critique Grace.
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Oh i do love the way the rhymes intone the beat of the poem… I love to write in form, but I have found how easily people think I write free verse just because I insert linebreaks 🙂 … I think one should be careful with the nasty outdoors *smile*
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Thank you Bjorn. I write a lot poems within poems and dialogue chains. The outdoors has lots of scary critters too. 🙂
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I love this line: “around dry corn husks tied with crepe – red fruit and juice”
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Thank you Elsa, that was the one line that I changed multiple times before I posted.
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puts a whole different slant on riding off into the sunset! really interesting use of rhyme and imagery – meter could yet be your métier
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Thank you Laura, but meter seems so metering to me.
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Beautifully written, Brian 🙂
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Thank you Sanaa.
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I love all the aspects of this. Form, rhyme, format, and luscious words and narrative. Stunning work, and it and it reads effortlessly.
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Thank you Anita, I’m glad the poem was so vivid for you.
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You’re most welcome.
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An impressive undertaking, Brian! The exercise was to “force” your hand at rhyme. I do free verse a lot myself, but probably in equal doses as my rhyming poetry. Glad you found the pub and I look forward to more of your work!
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Thank you Walter. Rest assured your ‘mission’ accomplished. Thank you for the warm welcome at the pub. Most of the writing prompts from 2006-2010 are now defunct so it is nice to find a new community.
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