insomnia

“What am I?”

the moon is low in the west
jupiter chases her reflection
venus has gone to bed
all alone with my thoughts
the fear i feel
lost in a universe
without him
my star
my hope
what am i
why can’t i love
why must i constantly
hate who i am
the moon is low in the west
it needs some color
should i wake him
maybe he’ll be hard
maybe i’ll cry this time

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4 thoughts on “insomnia

  1. Oh, I really love this. Especially these lines:
    “jupiter chases her reflection
    venus has gone to bed”
    “all alone with … what am i”
    “should i wake him
    maybe he’ll be hard
    maybe i’ll cry this time” … I LOVE the ending.

    Excellent work.

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