time to let go

vulcanized rope swing
daring parabolic arc
minnows quicksilver
leaves washed decompose downstream
deep burnt colors fluttered breeze

daring final fling
denuded branches quiver
manila cordage
speckled vibrant palette whirls
water striders surf ripples

The Daily Post prompt

Authors note: not sure which tanka I like better.

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