In the area of Florida where I live, the American Robins have returned from further south on the peninsula. They gather in flocks of hundreds, sometimes thousands and move north as the weather warms. In the early morning and late afternoon one such flock drinks at our birdbath. Most years they roost for a day, this year, they’ve been here three already.
each dawn clear or clouds
orange breasts purpose puffed
slaking thirst rotated turns
open-beaked territorial chirps
even spaced along bath rim
water splashed everywhere
at sixes and sevens of the clock
when they leave to feed
cardinals doves and jays
drink in peaceful quiet
Love this juxtaposition “open-beaked territorial chirps
even spaced along bath rim”
Territorial and yet accommodating…much we can learn from the animals and birds.
Such gorgeous, vivid imagery. They must look amazing. I’m surprised they appear so different from my two UK robins, which live almost permanently on my fence and in the space under my maple tree.
Thanks everyone, I know I usually respond individually, but my wife had some minor surgery this morning and have spent the afternoon caring for her.
The robins are still here, I filled the birdbath four times today. They are chirping up a storm right now as they settle in for the evening to sleep. It is very interesting to watch them sort out the hierarchy as to who drinks first. It seems the biggest and oldest go first and the young go last.
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Love this juxtaposition “open-beaked territorial chirps
even spaced along bath rim”
Territorial and yet accommodating…much we can learn from the animals and birds.
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I love their “so call” rain song. I’m jealous, since we won’t see robins for another few months.
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I will be glad to see the robins and know spring is not far away. Take good care of them : )
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That must be a wonderful sight at your birdbath with all those robins around it.
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What a great. sight the birdbath must be each morning!
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I would love to hear that music and noise Brian ~
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Love the fact that the joyful chirps are really quarrels and fights.
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awww. love the word choice and the phrase “open-beaked territorial chirps”
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Lovely, lovely imagery… ❤
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Cute bird; lovely descriptive poem.
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Awwwww ❤️ this is sooo adorable!! 😀 Love it! ❤️
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Such gorgeous, vivid imagery. They must look amazing. I’m surprised they appear so different from my two UK robins, which live almost permanently on my fence and in the space under my maple tree.
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You have wonderfully captured this scene.
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Orange breasts purpose puffed.
Our robins look a little different, and are solitary, but just as cocky.
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Thanks everyone, I know I usually respond individually, but my wife had some minor surgery this morning and have spent the afternoon caring for her.
The robins are still here, I filled the birdbath four times today. They are chirping up a storm right now as they settle in for the evening to sleep. It is very interesting to watch them sort out the hierarchy as to who drinks first. It seems the biggest and oldest go first and the young go last.
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Lovely scene you’ve set in words. Enjoy their presence. 🙂
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