last call Posted on September 4, 2016 by Brian marriage in eclipse bend elbow past closing time tree frog lullaby The Daily Post and Haiku Horizon #133 prompts. Added a different version in comments. marriage lullaby past closing time tree frog bend elbow eclipse light Share this:FacebookTumblrPrintTwitterLike Loading...
The imagery here is very vivid. I find the first and last words intriguing – the way one is pitted against the other via an alcoholic intermediary! LikeLike Reply
I keep rereading this and every time l’m blown away by the massive brilliance contained in this tiny poem. LikeLike Reply
I am deeply honored by your comment Sydney. I try to create haiku and senryu that are distilled from much larger stories. LikeLike Reply
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The imagery here is very vivid. I find the first and last words intriguing – the way one is pitted against the other via an alcoholic intermediary!
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marriage lullaby
past closing time tree frog bend
elbow eclipse light
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Mmmmm, now that’s an interesting, and somewhat opposite, image, too…
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A little more vivid, shall we say.
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That’s an excellent description. 🙂
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marriage in eclipse….so thoughtfully crafted!
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment. 🙂
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I keep rereading this and every time l’m blown away by the massive brilliance contained in this tiny poem.
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I am deeply honored by your comment Sydney. I try to create haiku and senryu that are distilled from much larger stories.
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interesting one!
mine is here
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Thanks. I’ll be by later today.
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